Frage:
Hört sich das gut an? (Englischreferat) bitte mal drüberschauen!?
larila
2010-10-09 08:17:23 UTC
Hallo zusammen,
ich habe bald ein Referat in Englisch zu halten und möchte von euch wissen ob das gut bzw. ob es noch etwas zu verbessern gibt.

Hier ist das Referat:

Today I will give you some information about Hello Kitty.

First of all, I tell about the History of Hello Kitty.
Hello Kitty is a popular cartoon character which is created in 1974 by the Japanese Company Sanrio. They asked designer Ikuko Shimizu to invent a cartoon animal.
On November 1974 Sanrio introduced the first picture of hello kitty. She sat between a bottle of milk and a goldfish. At first she was just a little cat, which is sitting down and have a little red bow on her left ear.
The first product was a small coin purse in 1975.
In 1980 Sanrio has produced different products all around the world. For example: watches, clothes, lunchboxes, wallets, puppets and still even more.

Originally Hello Kitty was nameless. Then she was going to be called: White Kitty. Her nickname is Hello Kitty.
Hello Kitty has maintained her dominance over more than 450characters created by Sanrio
Every month Sanrio produces and design 500new Hello Kitty products.
She can be found on kitchen appliances, car accessories candies, handbags, computer games, diaries, mobile phones and other crazy stuffs.
Today is Hello Kitty one of Japan’s most popular brands.

Famous women like Mariah Carey, Britney Spears and Lisa Loeb also showed their adoration for the cute kitty.
Hello Kitty is a star attraction at Sanrio’s indoor theme Park which has 1.5millions visitors a year.

In her own make-believe World, Hello Kitty isn’t even Japanese.
She lives with her father, George White, Mother Mary White and twin sister Mimmy in a white house outside of London. They do not look like the same. Look at the bow. Hello Kitty prefers a red bow in her left ear. Mimmy has a yellow bow on her right.
She also has a pet cat named Charmmy and a hamster named Sugar
Hello Kitty has no mouth because if she doesn’t speak in a specific language then no one will feel ostracized.
Her birthday is one the first if November. She is a Scorpio. Her blood type is A.
She weighs the same as three apples and stands five apples tall.
Hello Kitty loves the colours red and pink.
Her Favourite Food is the apple pie which is baked by her mum. She also likes puddings and candies.
Her school is on the way to London, which is 4km from her home. Hello Kitty and her sister Mimmy take the bus to school every morning together.
Hello Kitty’s Favourite School Subjects are Music and English.
In her leisure she likes to go to the forest with her friends, play piano, collecting lots of cute items and play tennis.
She has an off- on boyfriend Dear Daniel a childhood friend who had to move with is Father to Africa
She is very happy and cheerful. In the future hello kitty would be a pianist or a poet.

In Spain she is called Hola Gatito
In French Bonjour Chat Petit.
Hello Kitty is a lovely cute cat that everyone loves.
That's the end of my presentation, thank you for your attention!


Dankeschön schonmal,
Larila!
Drei antworten:
sven
2010-10-10 11:40:33 UTC
Ich hoffe du liest deine schriftliche Ausarbeitung nicht vor. Sonst wird das kein sonderlich freies Referat.



Les es dir zuhause ein paar mal LAUT selber vor und dann schreib dir STICHPUNKTE, anhand derer du dann sprichst. Das können auch viele sein. Alternativ kannst du auch Stichpunkte in deinem ausgearbeiteten Text mit einem Marker HERVORHEBEN und orientierst dich dann an den Stichpunkten. Vorteil: Wenn dir ein Wort zur Formulierung fehlt, stehts immer noch aufm Blatt.



Ansonsten klingt das ganz okay. Hinweis falls du es abgeben willst: Schlag mal Groß- und Kleinschreibung nach, du hast viel zu viel großgeschrieben.
crader
2017-01-25 09:14:32 UTC
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